Here is the poem she wrote.
Sally
i still see her
my old teacher, legs bare
gauze skirt and clogs
a braid down her back
at the blackboard, tan arm raised
diagramming sentences
in her loopy script
i know the parts of speech
i make a fancy e
i write
when she arrived on my street
on the neighbor's motorcycle
tan arms
around his teenage chest
i closed my eyes
and turned away
i still see her
my old teacher, legs bare
gauze skirt and clogs
a braid down her back
at the blackboard, tan arm raised
diagramming sentences
in her loopy script
i know the parts of speech
i make a fancy e
i write
when she arrived on my street
on the neighbor's motorcycle
tan arms
around his teenage chest
i closed my eyes
and turned away
and here is mine.
Rainbow
The babbling brook joins the trickling river
and the clouds float by with harmony
while wind rustles through the trees
Golden yellow dandelions
invade the lush greenery of your favorite field
while their musky scent swirls around you
The long branches of the Kentucky Coffee Tree
create dancing shadows under the hot sun
Reminding you of old teacher legs
Floating about you are thick billowy clouds
and as they release their refreshing moisture,
your favorite field is brightened with rainbows
SO great, Ms. L! I love yours.
ReplyDeleteThis was really a hard one, I didn't realize how difficult it would be. But apparently we were both inspired in the end!
Thanks for being my pardner in poetry.
xo Marian aka runaway_tweets
It was really tricky! I had to step away from my normal form of writing!! LOVE writing with you missy!
ReplyDeleteDang girls! Impressive!!!!!
ReplyDeleteVery good ladies!
ReplyDeleteSo fun. I love how different they are! You took a very creative approach to the phrase. I like it.
ReplyDeleteyou make a wonderful duet! Looking forward to more!! love ya both xo
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